tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post8060946422768424234..comments2023-10-28T05:34:33.077-07:00Comments on एक नया सफ़र: ये नये जमाने का शहर हैdeepudarshanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16169793496865980154noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post-33756877192024185912011-02-16T05:23:09.622-08:002011-02-16T05:23:09.622-08:00sahi keh re ho,kuch had tak hm bhi sehmat hai tumh...sahi keh re ho,kuch had tak hm bhi sehmat hai tumhari baato se...Neha Ranjanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12924654417769895158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post-29094088911528696452011-02-15T09:02:47.453-08:002011-02-15T09:02:47.453-08:00nice job......shayad hum modern hote-hote apni jdo...nice job......shayad hum modern hote-hote apni jdon ko bhul rhe hain...Bhawna Tewarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18188173796212013351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post-91295282925776238372011-02-14T19:14:18.889-08:002011-02-14T19:14:18.889-08:00suruat ho gyi hai to ant to hoga hi........sirsuruat ho gyi hai to ant to hoga hi........sirdeepudarshanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16169793496865980154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post-68498123991908612142011-02-14T18:38:18.003-08:002011-02-14T18:38:18.003-08:00@रत्नेंद्र ने कह दिया सब कुछ दीपू ये दिल मांगे मोर...@रत्नेंद्र ने कह दिया सब कुछ दीपू ये दिल मांगे मोर बात शुरू तो अच्छी हुई पर मामला अंत तक ठीक से नहीं आया पर एक नयी सोच आभारMukulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17912641611101930410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5812344255560137788.post-50098796303036002632011-02-14T11:11:58.481-08:002011-02-14T11:11:58.481-08:00nice attempt , do some rectification with sentence...nice attempt , do some rectification with sentence framing and punctuation as well.<br />nice going dude.and put up something interested in BODY , although your conclusion is good but i am expecting more by the whole package ,<br /><br />And follow all the points of Mukul sir .<br />Blessings!!<br /><br />RoGGeR,<br /><br />Ratnendra K Pratnendrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16868563343817336362noreply@blogger.com